Today I Had a Haircut

I had a hair cut makes me think of one single hair. ;)

I had been thinking about having a short haircut, and today I did it. Yeah... but I was very unlucky: I had to go to two hairdressers to get my hair done properly.

Because The first haircut was just too terrible to go into work with tomorrow like that. It made me looks ten years older! I will never go to that place again.

The second hairdresser rescued my hair a little bit, and the price was better than the first one. She also coloured my hair.

Barber makes me think of haircuts for men, so I changed it to hairdresser.  In general, just pay attention to the past tense.

Today I had a hair cut

I have been thinking about having a short hair cut and today I did it. Yeah~
However, I was very unlucky. I went to two barbershops to get my hair done,
because the first hair cut was just too terrible and I can not go to work tomorrow like that. It makes me looks ten years older. I will never go to the shop again.

The second barbershop saved my hair a little bit and also colored my hair. The price was better than the first one.

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Today I had a haircut.

I have been thinking about getting a short haircut, and today I did it.  Yeah,
although I was very unlucky.  I went to two barbershops to get my hair done.
Because the first haircut was just too terrible, and I can't go to work tomorrow like that. It makes me look ten years older. I will never go to that barbershop again.

The second barbershop saved my hair a little bit, and the price was better there than at the first one.  The barber at the second barbershop also colored my hair.