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My workplace in the past
Since I graduated from the university, I have had dream to work in a secure company with good colleagues and good benefits. Luckily, one of the companies with which I had worked for many years was very valuable for me. There I got more knowledge and experiences and learned a lot how I could work with other people. I felt impressive in its work environment and was very happy to work with this company. So, I think that I will keep this company in my mind forever.
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I'm sorry it's too late but anyway, I hope you like this.
How to correct this short paragraph?
My workplace in the past
Since I graduated from the university, I have had a dream to work in a secure company with good colleagues and good benefits. Luckily, one of the companies in(for) which I had worked for many years was very valuable for me. There I got more knowledge and experiences and learned a lot about how I could work with other people. I was impressed by its work environment and was very happy to work in(for) this company. So, I think that I will keep this company in my mind forever.
"Work with a company" sounds more like you're collaborating with the company. I hope I got the meaning right.
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