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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I'm learning English, because I want to study abroad and make friends from England. My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Russia.I enjoy watching movies and listening to music.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English, because I want to study abroad and make friends from England. My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Russia.I enjoy watching movies and listening to music.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

 

I'm learning English because I want to study abroad and make friends from England. My native language is Russian and I grew up in Russia. I enjoy watching movies and listening to music.

 

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Perfect!! I removed two commas and added a space, but your grammar is perfect! Great job, and nice to meet you :)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because I want to study abroad, and would also like to make friends from England. My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Russia. I enjoy watching movies and listening to music.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because I want to study abroad and make friends from England. My native language is Russian and I grew up in Russia. I enjoy watching movies and listening to music.

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grammar is perfect, you need to improve in punctuation markings.

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