PART 2 of my correction

Hi, I don’t know you can already write in Chinese character, because you used PIN YIN last time, excellent! :) The characters are harder than PIN YIN for your learning, so I advise that you could combine these two elements together. Besides, I would like to tell you something you’d better pay attention to:

1 English words are much more easier than Chinese character on length of the words, usually, we use one Chinese phrase（two words）to describe one simple word in English. Eg: feel=感觉, still=仍然. In this way, pls don’t cut either one word in each phrase, because without each word, the meaning of this phrase won’t be complete and clear.

2 some new words added in your article, and I guess some of them you don’t know how to speak in Chinese: 

1) flash （verb.）=闪光shan3 guang1，eg: flashlight. card=卡片ka3 pian4，flash card= 闪视卡片， you just need to say 学习用的卡片xue2 xi2 yong4 de ka3 pian4（cards for learning），or 学习卡片（study card）. 

2) hurricane=飓风ju4 feng1 ,Sandy, the news translated it as 桑迪sang1 di2，

3) 提高…水平= improve level of … , 进步= make progress （usage: sth 进步了）

Eg: 我的口语进步了= I have made a progress on my speaking. 

4) 仍=仍然/仍, means still ，its synonym is还是 

5) Using more appropriate conjunctions 连词 will make your sentences better! 

Eg: 如果我想要记住3000个汉字，我就需要练习读报纸。If I want to remember 3000 words, I will need to practice reading newspaper.

Eg: 我正在学习汉字，但我还是喜欢拼音。I’m learning the Chinese characters, but I still like learning PIN YIN.

Eg: （因为）昨天飓风桑迪来了，所以我没有去上班。（Because）the Hurricane Sandy was coming yesterday, So I didn’t go to work.

6) We always use this symbol《》 outside the name of one book in Chinese, and this is almost the only way we use 《》. Actually, I’m wondering to know which symbol do you add outside one book’s name? Is it <>? 

  Eg: 我非常喜欢《飘》这本书。I like the book <Gone with the Wind> very much.

开始学汉字了

我终于开始学习汉字了。 但是仍感到有很多汉字不知道。现在我用《Flash Cards》学汉字。有人告诉我需要记忆3000汉字,如果我要读报纸的话。 我还是喜欢拼音。并且需要提高我的发音水平。昨天因为《Hurricane Sandy》， 所以我没有去上班，但我仍去上课了。太多废话！


Hello all. Here I am again with another short entry. Except this time it's in 汉字! I probably made tons of grammar mistakes, but I don't mind because I know I will stop making them eventually. Thanks for reading.
谢谢你们!

我开始学汉字了

我终于开始学习汉字了。 但是仍然感觉有很多汉字我不知道。现在我用学习卡片《Flash Cards》学习汉字。有人告诉我:如果我需要记住得3000汉字，如果我要开始读报纸，但是我还是仍喜欢拼音。同时我还需要提高进步我的发音水平。昨天有飓风桑迪《Hurricane Sandy》， 所以我没有去上班，但是我还是仍有去上课了。很废话！（the same as 这话很多余吧?） 

谢谢你们都

开始学汉字了

我终于开始学习汉字了， 但是仍感有很多汉字我不知道。现在我用《Flash Cards》学汉字。有人告诉我需要记得3000汉字如果我要读报纸（汉语中，一般说先说如果，，，然后，，，所以你这句话应该说如果我要读报纸，我大概要记3000个汉字）。 我仍喜欢拼音（汉语中，一句话如果没有说完，符号用，号，不要总是用句号。）。我还需要进步（改为纠正）我的发音水平。昨天有《Hurricane Sandy》， 所以我没有去上班，但是我仍有去上课）。很废话！


Hello all. Here I am again with another short entry. Except this time it's in 汉字! I probably made tons of grammar mistakes, but I don't mind because I know I will stop making them eventually. Thanks for reading.
谢谢你们都

开始学汉字了

我终于开始学习汉字了。， 但是仍感到有很多汉字我不知道。现在我现在用《Flash Cards》学汉字。有人告诉我如果需要记得3000汉字如果那么我要读报纸。 我仍然喜欢用拼音。我还需要提高进步我的发音水平。昨天有《Hurricane Sandy》， 所以我没有去上班，但是我仍然有去上课了（“但是我仍有去上课”is ok,but sometimes we prefer to say“但是我仍然去上课了”）。很多废话！


Hello all. Here I am again with another short entry. Except this time it's in 汉字! I probably made tons of grammar mistakes, but I don't mind because I know I will stop making them eventually. Thanks for reading.
谢谢你们都（“谢谢你们都”is like network language,haha~）