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My best memory in youth---but it turns to be a sentiment thing I still remember that afternoon : my first boy friend and I went to a hill beside my campus after getting there , i started to draw a picture he climbed on a tree besides me and watched me drawing once i had a break I saw him on the tree and the warm sunshin was behind my prince "what a beautiful sight“!I thought at that moment , I feel full of hapiness sevral years past , I always record that image and ask myself: why can not it stay forever? why did we break up since we were in love with each other at first ?

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My best memory of my youth---but it turns out to be a sentimental thing

I still remember that afternoon :
my first boyfriend and I went to a hill beside my campus
after getting there , i started to draw a picture
he climbed on a tree beside me and watched me drawing
once i took a break,

I saw him in the tree, and the warm sunshine was behind my prince
"what a beautiful sight!" I thought
at that moment , I felt full of hapiness
several years later , I always remember that image and ask myself:
why can not it stay forever?
why did we break up, since we were in love with each other at first ? (this sentence is not so clear to me)

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