my daily routine

i'm a student, I'm learning pharmaceutical in Univesity of Medicine and pharmacy. every morning i drive my motorcycle to school. i study all day, morning in auditorium an evening in laboratory. afler studied, i go home. the traffic on HoChiMinh city is terrible, i live far my family. my family live in DaLat. I dont know

I'm a student studying Pharmaceuticals (1) at the University of Medicine and Pharmacy. Every morning I drive my motorcycle (2) to school. I study all day, mornings are in the auditorium and evenings are in the laboratory. After studying, I go home. The traffic in Ho Chi Minh City (3) is terrible. I live far from (5) my family, who live in DaLat. I don't know...

First, please don't take any of these corrections as evidence that your English is bad! Your composition is very good! But, here are a few notes...

(1) Like the previous poster mentioned, the word "pharmaceutical" alone is only an adjective and doesn't work as the title of an area of study. It needs to be combined with another noun to make sense. It is easy to understand that it has something to do with pharmacy or drugs, but it is not exact. I think it's probably a difficult thing to translate, but maybe Pharmacology or Pharmaceutical Sciences.

(2) It is correct to say "I drive my motorcycle" but I think it's more common to hear people say "I ride my motorcycle". Ride and drive are not interchangeable, but it's a common expression.

(3) Ho Chi Minh City is written as separate words in English newspapers.

(4) I live far...family - you need a preposition to show the relationship between family and I live far. So - I live far from my family.

I'm sorry if these explanations are confusing! And again, it was a good composition!

my daily routine

I'm a student studying pharmacology at the Univesity of Medicine and pharmacy. every morning i rive my motorcycle to school. I study all day, mornings are in  the auditorium an evenings are in the laboratory. After studing,  I go home. The traffic in Ho Chi Minh City is terrible, i live far from my family, who live in DaLat. I dont know

my daily routine

i'm a student, I'm learning pharmaceutical in the Univesity of Medicine and pharmacy (I don't usually see the word "pharmaceutical" on its own, usually it's joined with something like "pharmaceutical technologies.") . every morning i drive my motorcycle to school  (Xích Lô!). i study all day, morning in auditorium an evening in laboratory. afler studied studying, i go home. the traffic on in HoChiMinh city is terrible, i live far from my family. my family live in DaLat. I dont know