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A fun Day(travel to an old place) Some days ago, i travel to an old &traditional village of my country,It called XI-TANG in china. When I come there,I was sprised by the old building,It looks very beautiful esperially in dark, because all the lights turn on,just look like a drawing. I take some pictures:

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A fun Day (travel to an old place)

Some days ago, i travelled to an old, &traditional Chinese village of my country It called XI-TANG in china.
When I arrived come there, I was surprised by the old buildings, they It look very beautiful, especially in dark, at night, because all the lights are turned on. It just looks like a drawing.
I took some pictures:

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A fun Day(travel to an old place)

A fun day (travelling to an old traditional place)


Some days ago, i travel to an old &traditional village of my country,It called XI-TANG in china.

A few days ago, I travelled to an old traditional village of my country. It's called Xi-Tang in China.


When I come there,I was sprised by the old building,It looks very beautiful esperially in dark,

When I got there, I was surprised by the old buildings. They look very beautiful especially at night.

 

because all the lights turn on,just look like a drawing.

Because once all the lights are turned off they look like "drawings" (cant correct, not sure what you exactly saw =) 

 

I take some pictures:

Here are some pictures I took:

 

Note: I would love to learn Mandarin through any kind of chat, let me know if you are up for it =)

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A fun Day(travel to an old place)

Some days ago, i travel to an old &traditional village of my country,It called XI-TANG in china.
When I come there,I was sprised by the old building,It looks very beautiful esperially in dark, because all the lights turn on,just look like a drawing.
I take some pictures:

 

I suggest it's better if you say...

 

Few days ago, I traveled to an old and traditional village in country. The place is called XI-TANG in China. When I went there, I was surprised by the old building. The building was very beautiful especially in the dark because all the lights were turned on making it look like a drawing. 

I took some pictures:

 

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