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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am still learning English, because i wanna work in another country... and also make some friends... I'm 23 years old, live in Jeonju. let me be your friend ^^

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am still learning English, because I want to work in another country...
and also make some friends...
I'm 23 years old and live in Jeonju. Let me be your friend ^^

 

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Let's be friends!

'wanna' is a word, but it's informal. Instead, I corrected it the "proper way" (want to).

Don't forget to capitalize words.

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i think i can help you! i will teach you english and instead you will teach me korean! cuz i want to work in korea! ^_^ let's be friend! you can contact me whenever you want : [email protected]
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am still learning Englishbecause i want to work in another country and to make some friends.
I'm 23 years old and live in Jeonju. let me be your friend ^^

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- If you are talking to friends in chat or if it's something casual, "wanna" is acceptable. However, if you are writing something that needs to be more professional (for example: a cover letter for a job) you should say "want to"; "wanna" is basically slang for "want to"

 

- "And also" is redundant so you can just delete the word "also"

 

Hope this helps ^__^

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