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the Double Ninth Festival重阳节 Today is the Double Ninth Festival, also known as the Seniors' Day . It is a trational Chinese festival, on the September ninth of the lunar calender. Every year on that day, people will climb mountains, enjoy the charm of chrysanthemum, drink wine made from chrysanthemum , wear cornel and so on. Actually, I do none of these activities today. Because more and more people don't celebrate the festival, there is not such a strong air of joyfulness.However, it's still a good day for someone to go out and enjoy the beauty of Autum. The government in 1989 decided the Double Ninth Festival as Seniors ' Day,mainly to advocate the filial piety to aged people,especially their own parents. Today is aslo Hoar Frost Descends (or Frost's Descent or First Frost or 霜降 in Chinese)and it's very cold here, so I stay in the room all day.

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the Double Ninth Festival重阳节

Today is the Double Ninth Festival, also known as the Seniors' Da有 . It is a trational Chinese festival, on the September ninth day of the ninth month (you really cannot call a lunar month by the name of the Gregorian calendar month) of the lunar calendar. Every year on that day people will climb mountains, enjoy the charm of chrysanthemums, drink wine made from chrysanthemum flowers, wear cornel/dogwood blooms (flowers or berries?) and so on. Actually, I will do none of these activities today; because more and more fewer and fewer people don't celebrate the festival, there is not such a strong air of joyfulness. However, it's still a good day for someone to go out and enjoy the beauty of autumn.
In 1989 The government declared in 1989 decided the Double Ninth Festival as Senior's Day, mainly to advocate the filial piety to respect for aged people, especially their own parents.
Today there is also a hoar frost Descends (or Frost's Descent? or First Frost or 霜降 in Chinese) (I know 霜 but not 霜降 ) and it's very cold here, so I stay indoors in the room all day.

 

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As a genuine 老人, since I was in 桂林 that day in 2012, I climbed 老人山to see the city views 老鬼
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the Double Ninth Festival重阳节

Today is the Double Ninth Festival, also known as the Seniors' Day . It is a trational traditional Chinese festival, on the September ninth 9th of the lunar calender. Every year on that day, people will climb mountains, enjoy the charm of chrysanthemum, drink wine made from chrysanthemum, wear cornel and so on. Actually, I do none of these activities today. Because more and more people don't celebrate the festival, there is not such a strong air of joyfulness. However, it's still a good day for someone to go out and enjoy the beauty of Autumn.
The government in 1989 decided on the Double Ninth Festival as Seniors' Day, mainly to advocate the promote filial piety towards aged old (or elderly) people, especially their own parents.
Today it is aslo also Hoar Frost Descends (or Frost's Descent or First Frost or 霜降 in Chinese) and it's very cold here, so I stay in the my room all day.

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