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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning English, because I want to study abroad. To be honest, I'm preparing for the TOEFL exam, so I need some more practice with native speakers to improve my skills My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Belarus. I enjoy reading, cooking and dancing.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to study abroad. To be honest, I'm preparing for the TOEFL exam, so I need some more practice with native speakers to improve my skills.
My native language is Russian and I grew up in Belarus.
I enjoy reading, cooking and dancing.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English() because I want to study abroad. To be honest, I'm preparing for the TOEFL exam, so I need some more practice with native speakers to improve my skills
My native language is Russian, and I grew up in Belarus.
I enjoy reading, cooking and dancing.

 

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A tiny mistake in an otherwise flawless entry.  Молодец.  ))

 

Regarding the deleted comma, this article explains when commas are necessary when using "because".  :)  - http://wps.ablongman.com/long_faigley_penguinhb_1/7/1977/506141.cw/index.html%20parentloc 

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