I'm sorry my computer put all those extra blank lines in my entry! I don't know why this is happening today. :(

Okay, I'm back to do a few more! :)

3. When i have breakfast ,i go to the supermaket shopping. becasuse i need something for winter.

[Supermarket is a word for grocery stores only. A store with many types of items is called a "department store."]

After I have breakfast, I go shopping at a department store, because I need something for winter.

4. In the supermaket ,a dazzling array of beautiful exhibits thing have been in my eyes.

At the department store, I see a dazzling array of beautiful displays.

[The word "exhibit" is not usually used for clothing displays in the U.S. but maybe it is in other parts of the world? I don't know.)

5. so i quickly and happily running ,a beautiful shirt and woolen sweater is my best favourite ,it is not only beautiful but also very low price , so i immediately buy them .

I love shopping, so I hurry to look at the displays. A beautiful shirt and a woolen sweater are my favorite things. They are not only beautiful but also are very low priced, so I immediately buy them.

6. When i were lonely , i choose the shopping .shopping can be to promote me have energy in my life,at the same time ,.it can give me a lot of happy, i thank it very much.

Whenever I am lonely, I like to go shopping. It gives me energy and makes me happy. I enjoy it very much!

Hello! Good job with your writing practice! I have time to comment on only a few things right now, but I will be back later to see if someone else has finished helping you.

Here are a few comments to begin:

1. I see that you are putting a “space” (a blank) before each comma. We never put a space before a comma. We always put a space after a comma! That is an easy mistake to fix.

2. When we use the word “I” we always use the “capital” form of the letter I.

Okay, I will split the entry into 6 parts.

1. Taday, i can have a rest in Firday that i do everything.

Is Friday is a day that you do not have to go to work or school? That means you have a “day off” on Friday. You can do anything you choose, right? But you won’t do “everything”!  Check that you know the difference between anything and everything.

Today is Friday, so I have a day off. I can do anything I choose.

2. I have wake up is already at 10 am, i feel comfortable a day ,something i do the best .

Is this later than your usual time of waking up? If so, we would say, “I sleep in until 10 a.m.”  “To sleep in” is a phrasal verb for sleeping later than usual.

I sleep in until 10 a.m. (I am not sure what you mean in the rest of the sentence)

3. When i have breakfast ,i go to the supermaket shopping. becasuse i need something for winter.

4. In the supermaket ,a dazzling array of beautiful exhibits thing have been in my eyes.

5. so i quickly and happily running ,a beautiful shirt and woolen sweater is my best favourite ,it is not only beautiful but also very low price , so i immediately buy them .

6. When i were lonely , i choose the shopping .shopping can be to promote me have energy in my life,at the same time ,.it can give me a lot of happy, i thank it very much.