About a my year

This year is my third year in university. I went to prep schooI along one year. I'm  studying electronic engineering. I have some good friends. I really like them. I am always together with them. Last week they organized a youth concert is organized at my university. We enjoyed it so much.

Furthermore i also love electronics. I like to research investigate new technology. My classes are difficult and they take a lot time indeed, but i work at the university social club of university. My department is the technical project department. We try to create a small, simple robot. I want to increase my knowledge of engineering knowledge but my priority is English right now. I can formulate short, easy sentences. Next summer i am plannig to go Language school to abroad. I can't decide where to go. I tried to write a long paragraph. :) If any English native speakers correct this silly entry, I will be happy. Thank you so much!

About a my year

This year is my third year in university. I went to prep school for along one ("for a year" sounds better than for one year, in my opinion) year. I study electronic engineering. I have some best great friends. I really like them. I am always together with them. Last week a youth concert is was organized in by my university. We enjoyed had so much fun.
Furthermore I love electronics. I investigate new technological productions. My lessons are difficult and they take a lot of time, indeed but i also work in the ieee social club of university (social club or professional society?). My department is technical project department. We try to create a small and simple robot. I want to improve my engineering knowledge, but the most important thing for me is (learning) English for me. I can set make/put together/ construct easy and short sentences. Next summer i am planning to go language school to abroad. I can't decide where I should go. I tried to write a long paragraph for me. :) If English native speakers correct this silly entry, I will be happy. Thank you so much!

Not a silly entry at all, keep up the good work!

About a my year

This year is my third year in university. I went to prep school along for one year. I am studying electronic engineering. I have some close best friends, I really like them. I am always together spending time with them. Last week, a youth concert is was organized in my university. We enjoyed it so much.

Furthermore, I love electronics. I investigate new technological productions. My lessons are difficult and they take a lot time, indeed but I work in the social club of at my university. My department is technical project department. We are trying to create a small and simple robot.

I want to improve my engineering knowledge, but English is the most important is English for me. I can set formulate easy and short sentences. Next summer I am plannig to go attend language school to abroad. I can't decide where to must go. I tried to write long paragraphs that are difficult/challenging for me. :) If any English native speakers correct this silly entry, I will be happy. Thank you so much!

This is not a silly entry at all. Keep working and soon you will be fluent in English!