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Making a decision In the last months I've trying to find a job so last week my brother talked to me about a job in another state, there I could be working in a hospital. In the beginning it looked me a good idea but later I thought a lot in that, so I asked an advice to my mom, and she told me that I have never lived alone and I don´t know anyone there so it could be hard to me, she told me that if I stayed here, she and my father could help me to put my consulting room. So I’ve decided stay here and continue with my own plans. I have already the equipment so I hope I can find soon a local for rent and start to work. I hope I had made a right decision (:

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Making a Decision

In the last several months I've been trying to find a job. So, last week my brother talked to me about a job in another state, there where I could be working in a hospital.

 

In the beginning it looked seemed to me like a good idea. But later, I thought  a lot in that    about it and I asked my mom for her advice.  and  She told me that I have never lived alone and   I don´t know anyone there so it could be hard to for me.

 

She told me that if I stayed here, she and my father could help me  to put set up my consulting room.  


So, I’ve decided to stay  here and continue with my own plans. I   have already  already have the equipment I need so I hope I can find soon soon to find a  local  location for rent and start to work. 

 

I hope I had made a right decision (:

 

 I hope you get other suggestions. I usually miss some things. Good luck with your work!! 

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This sounds better sorry " so I hope I can soon find a location for rent and start to work."
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yeah it's right, thank you for your good wishes :)
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It's indeed hard to make decisions like this, but it's even harder to stand by your decisions. I wish you all the best.

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