Why the Chinese people are unhappy (1)

Reason one: social inequality

With the rapid development of China's economy, the gap between rich and poor is becoming wider.  The common people work hard but their income is very low and the burden is very heavy (taxes, a variety of insurance costs, children's education, etc.).  A minority of people enjoy privileges such as earning more money and a variety of welfare programs, but their burden is relatively lower.  For instance, China's civil servants don't have to pay insurance premiums and enjoy pension insurance.  Given these comparative situations, it is difficult for the great majority of China's people to be happy.

Crowe, this is generally well-written and you have all of the basic concepts of the English language.  Once difference between Chinese and English is that we put a space between punctuation marks and the next word.  I hope this correction helps.

why Chinese people are unhappy(1)

reason one:social inequality
With the rapid development of China′s economy,The gap between rich and poor is more and more wide. The common people hard working but Income is very low and burden is very heavy(tax,various insurance cost ,children's education cost,etc.). The minority of people who enjoying privileges is easy to make money,enjoying various welfare,and their burden relatively is less,for instance.China's civil servant don't need pay insurance payment and enjoy pension insurance. Under the comparative psychology,The China's great majority of peopleIs hard to be happy.