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Internship in ♥ Love is patience. Love is wait. Love is understanding and tolerance. We may have differences, but we can overcome them hand in hand. I dunno how to tell you how much I love you. I used to bore the teachers with mechanical compositions and essays, but right now I feel constantly inspired and sentimental to convey you my deepest affections. I am not so good at dealing with love relationship, but I am learning. I cherish. I shall never draw back. My feelings are heavy. Sometimes I lose rationality and hurt you. I will learn, though. I am still at the internship stage. I hope our love is like the gentle streams of the rivulet flowing steadily into the mighty ocean, calm and mild and perpetual, frequently glorified by fervent outbursts of heated passions. Love is two distinct persons merge gradually into one in harmony. Love is forgiving me, and forgiving you and we still lean against each other tightly.

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Internship in ♥

Love is patience. Love is waiting. Love is understanding and tolerance. We may have differences, but we can overcome them hand in hand. I don't know not that informality is always bad how to tell you how much I love you. I used to bore the teachers with mechanical compositions and essays, but right now I feel constantly inspired, and am sentimental to convey you my deepest affections.
I am not so good at dealing with romantic relationships, but I am learning.
I cherish. I shall never draw back. My feelings are heavy. Sometimes I lose rationality and hurt you. I will learn, though. I am still a student.
I hope our love is like the gentle streams of the rivulet flowing steadily into the mighty ocean, calm and mild and perpetual, frequently interupted by fervent outbursts of heated passions.
Love is two distinct persons merging gradually into one in harmony.
Love is you forgiving me, and me forgiving you and us still leaning against each other tightly.

 

Here is my suggestions, they're not really any better or any worse than anyone else's, probably.

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You could also maybe say 'tributary' or 'river' instead of 'rivulet'. I think a tributary is actually something that flows into a river though, not the ocean. Not sure. Took a minute for that word to come into my mind.
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so romantic
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Internship in ♥

Love is patience. Love waits. Love is understanding and tolerance. We may have differences, but we can overcome them hand in hand. I don't know how to tell you how much I love you. I used to bore the teachers with mechanical compositions and essays, but right now I feel constantly inspired and sentimental to convey to you my deepest affections.
I am not so good at dealing with love relationships, but I am learning.
I cherish. I shall never draw back. My feelings are heavy. Sometimes I lose rationality and hurt you. I will learn, though. I am still at the internship stage.
I hope our love is like the gentle streams of the rivulet flowing steadily into the mighty ocean, calm and mild and perpetual, frequently glorified by fervent outbursts of heated passions.
Love is two distinct persons merging gradually into one in harmony.
Love is forgiving me, and forgiving you and we still lean against each other tightly.

 

Wow, that was so wonderful. Poetic and romantic. I hope it is from personal experience, because you seem to be really in love with someone and it seems to be something special.

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Internship in ♥

Love is patience. Love is wait. Love is understanding and tolerance. We may have differences, but we can overcome them hand in hand. I dunno how to tell you how much I love you. I used to bore the teachers with mechanical compositions and essays, but right now I feel constantly inspired and sentimental to convey you my deepest affections.
I am not so good at dealing with love relationship, but I am learning.
I cherish. I shall never draw back. My feelings are heavy. Sometimes I lose rationality and hurt you. I will learn, though. I am still at the internship stage.
I hope our love is like the gentle streams of the rivulet flowing steadily into the mighty ocean, calm and mild and perpetual, frequently glorified by fervent outbursts of heated passions.
Love is two distinct persons merge gradually into one in harmony.
Love is forgiving me, and forgiving you and we still lean against each other tightly.

 

 

 

very nicely said - I am so sentimental i am going to cry!!!

 

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