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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My name is Steve,I'm lived in XIAMEN,CHINA.I'm forty .I have a son and Iove him very much. In my work usually use in English,but Ieally forget everything that I had leart,So I must relearn it.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My name is Steve, I'm lived in Xiamen, China. I'm forty. I have a son and Iove him very much.
In my work I frequently usually use in English, but r Ieally [OR then I] forget everything that I learned, so had leart,So I must relearn it.

Welcome to italki.
A few problems but not bad. 
The problem that almost every Chinese member has is the punctuation and spacing. There is always a space after a period (.), comma (,), question mark (?), exclamation point (!), etc. The next sentence (but not the next phrase - as in after a comma) always starts with a capital letter. You would do well to attach a note to your computer to remind yourself of that so that it becomes easy to do.

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