First notebook entry: Introducing myself (je me présente/qui suis-je?/....)

J'apprends le français parce que j'adore les langues étrangères [apprendre differentes langues] .
Je parle persan et j'habite en Iran.

comments:

"j'adore apprendre différentes langues" is good, but I think your idea was to say: I'm fond of foreign languages (and we can guess than you want to learn them eventually). So, in French as in Persian, always try to have a light style , express your idea simply. Most of the time, French seems hard because people write sentences, heavy and complicated. I hope you can understand my advice.

Best wishes