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The magic show I love magic show! How about you? I saw the world famous magician David copperfield on TV. He made someone float in the air. He even cut a woman in half! Of course, the woman lived, the magician put her back together. Maybe you like me, also want to know how he did that. But just forget it, the magicians never tell their sectets. Because if we knew, it wouldn't be magic. Do you think so?

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The magic show

I love magic shows! How about you? I saw the world-famous magician David Copperfield on TV. He made someone float in the air. He even cut a woman in half! Of course, the woman lived survived - the magician put her back together. Maybe you, like me, also want to know how he did that? But Well, just forget it! the Magicians never tell their secrets,_because if we knew, it wouldn't be magic. Do you think so agree?
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The magic show

I love magic shows!   How about you?   I saw the world- famous magician David Copperfield on TV.   He made someone float in the air.   He even cut a woman in half!   Of course,   the woman survived;   the magician put her back together. Maybe you ,  like me,   also want to know how he did that.   Well,  just forget it!   Magicians never tell their secrets.  If we knew,   it wouldn't be magic.   Do you agree?
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The magic show

I love magic shows!  How about you?  I saw the world-famous magician David Copperfield on TV.  He made someone float in the air.  He even cut a woman in half! Of course, the woman survived; the magician put her back together.   Maybe you, like me, also want to know how he did that.   But Well, you can just forget it; the magicians never tell their secrets. Because If we knew, it wouldn't be magic. Do you agree?
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As quoted from the passage, "He even cut a woman in half! Of course, the woman lived, the magician ..." If you said it this way, people might think that the woman (assistant of the magician) was alive before the show, but she died after being cut into half! Hence, the preferred way is to use present tense: the woman (better with: "lady", or "assistant of the magician") is always/still alive. Additionally, there was a typo in "secrets", and Copperfield (surname) needs to be capitalized on the first letter. Take care, and good night. / 晚安。

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