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My boring holiday Yesterday is National Day .A very important day fo china . For this day ,I have a short holiday ,seven days .I don`t want go outside ,it`s too crowded .I don`t want surf in internet too ,i really don`t know what to do . But ,fortunately .I found this Web ,is very useful i think .i want to make friends who are in English speaking country,we can chat with each other ,hope you can meet soon .

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My boring holiday

Yesterday is was National Day - a very important day for China.
For this day, I have a short holiday of seven days. I  don`t want to go outside, it`s too crowded. I don`t want to surf the internet either, i really don`t know what to do. 

But fortunately, I found this website. I think it is very useful. I want to make friends who are in English-speaking countries, we can chat with each other. I hope you we can meet soon.

 

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