First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am Sharon from China. I am a sunny girl, I am active toward life, as I know life is valuable, since no one gets a second chance at life. I am now studying at medical university, majoring in clinical medicine. I love sports, especially badminton, it's great. When I am playing it, I enjoy myself so much! It makes me relax. Oh, if I have a chance, I will try to play tennis. It looks cool! Also, I love sweet food, especially icecream. No one can resist its temptation. When I am sad, I love eating icecream, as it can take my troubles away.

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Quite well written. Just remember to capitalise names and the pronoun "I", and to put commas before spaces ("x, y" not "x ,y").

Also, don't confuse "its" with "it's". Here's the difference:
its = possessive form of "it"
it's = it is