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Why do you think there are so many wars related with religion? How would you solve this problem? Religion is peaceful and teaching true way of life but every time so many wars related with religion. In the past 100 years facts show that so many wars become between high developed country such as USA, in where traditional religion is Christian, which is enormous religion of the world and Arabian country such as Iraqi, Afghanistan and Syria, which has Islamic religion, which is enormous religion of the world. There are possible reasons for this: High developed country interest natural resources in particular crude oil, that is very important to industry, agriculture, shipping, logistic and transportation besides more demanded resources, as well as pure water resources, which would be high demanded product in the future. However, Arabian country own the resources. High developed country’s government, with the aim of own natural resources of Arabian country, used the religion to start war. They made misunderstood between Islamic and Christian. For example Video of Muhammad in order that they want to hide that war starting because of natural resource. In other words politician has more powerful than religion because some governors, who has a lot political power and money, don’t carry about other people, who live in Arabian country, in where has a lot resources, and don’t respect their traditional culture In particular religion. The problem is that misunderstood between different religions. As result so many people, Who live in Arabian country, has been caught up in fighting between them especially children, woman and older people. For example war of Iraqi and Syria, which is starting. In my opinion when we to vote government we have to consider what government take action on foreign policy, in particular cooperation with other country as well as who would become president, be respect all religion. In fact decision of starting war was made by some governors, who has more power of political in their country and administration. In conclusion if so public aware of religion and politic has increased we could solve this problem.

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without religion they dominant every thing and everyone. so without it life is meaningless.
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A world without religion would be a better world, wouldn't it?
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good reasoning. politicians know what to do.
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