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About love
My roommate fell in love with a girl, but he's too shy to show (his) heart to her. He can do anything for her. Just because one time she said she like(d) a guy (to be ) tall and thin, he swam to crazy (death) for he (thought) swimming could make him taller (and skinnier). Just because one time she said she like(d) a guy (to be) tender and humane, he stud(ied) cook(ing) and read poetry everyday for I told him (that) cook(ing) and reading could turn him to be lady-like.
In fact I think/(suspect) the girl doesn't know the real meaning of "tender" and "humane", she just said because other girl(s) said/talked (about that).
I (don't) think we should not to plan what companion we may get, we should just wait. Because you will never know how much they change themselves for their lover who people in love before you fell in love(I don't quite understand this part, but I suggest you can write it this way, Because you never know how much people will change themselves for the one that they truly love). Maybe some guy who is always around you but whom ( you have) always ignored has done many things for you.
(Girls! Love me please!) (
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