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My Diary - a week after It's a few of days that I don't write in my diary. This week I was many busy with my job. Today is Saturday and I am more free. I have just done the lunch for my daughter, she will go back home soon from school. After lunch I'll go to stadium to watch the match of my favourite football's team. I hope that today it wins! Then, in the afternoon, I'll go to cinema with my family to watch "The Brave", a new walt Disney production. Yes, probabily it will be a good day!

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My Diary - a week after

It's a few of days that I don't write since I wrote/have written in my diary. This week I was many very busy with my job at work.
Today is Saturday and I am more free have more free time. I have just done the made lunch for my daughter, she will go back return home soon from school.
After lunch I'll go to the stadium to watch the match of my favourite football's team's match.
I hope that today it wins they win today!
Then, in the afternoon, I'll go I am going to the cinema with my family to watch "The "Brave", a new walt Disney production.
Yes, probabily it will be/is going to be a good day!

 

I hope your team wins.  The movie "Brave" is really good, I may be biased as it is set here in Scotland :)

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My Diary - a week after

 I haven't written in my diary for a few days. This week I was very busy with my job.
Today is Saturday and I am more freer. I have just done the  made lunch for my daughter, she will be back home soon from school soon.


After lunch I'll go to the stadium to watch the match of my favourite football's team.
I hope that today they win!
Then, in the afternoon, I'll go to  the cinema with my family to watch "The Brave", a new Walt Disney production.
Yes, probabily it will probably be a good day!

 

Note: I have rearranged the location of some of your words to reflect the usual structure of an English sentence. I have crossed out some words and changed them for words that are more common. Football teams are usually referred to as they.

With this sentence "Today is Saturday and I am more free", I did a minimal change. Freer is a word but you would usually see a  sentence  like "Today is Saturday and I have more free time". This is using words close to yours.

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