I have a dream
when I was a Child,I like watching animated cartoon.
When I was a fresh student,I want to major in cartoon.But it is a pity,I can not got a great mark.So I major in software engineering, but I did not give up my dream.I know I can applied for a chance to go to college on abroad. However,I found it is difficult,because I am not great in paintting .I thought I can hard work and be successful..It would be sad if it were a waste of time and turned out to do nothing for me.
So I am annoyed.Why there are so much difficulty through the life .What can I do?
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I have a dream
When I was a child, I liked watching animated cartoon.When I was a fresh student, I wanted to major in cartoon. But it is a pity that I could not get a great mark. So I majored in software engineering, but I did not give up my dream. I know I can have(apply for)(1) a chance to go to college (on)(2) abroad. However, I found it is difficult, because I am not great on/at paint(t)ing. I thought I could work hard and be successful..It would be sad if it was a waste of time and turns out to be nothing for me.
So I am annoyed. Why is there so much difficulty through the life? What can I do?
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(1) "apply for" means 申请 or 应征. So it's not appropriate to use with "a chance".
(2) The word "abroad" includes the prepositional meaning such as 在 or 到.
I found several parts with incorrect tense and corrected them.
尽管文章难度高，但写的还可以。继续加油！
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oh,Thank you.you are also talent and diligence ,you will be seccessful.take care.
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Don't worry. That is the life. Many things is not as we want. But don't stop dreaming. Cheer up & try your best, u will succed. Because u're a very talent girl
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