Appreciation

There is a special spot in a stadium near my home. It always reminds me of my father who passed has been away for a few years ago. In my mind, dad was a person who liked all kinds of sports especially basketball. He used to take me and our dog to the stadium to see him playing basketball. When he played, we often sat in the seats and watched him. He was expert at playing basketball and always won the match for his team and I was very proud of him. But he left me when I was six-years-old.
The last time we went there together was one week before he went to live stay in hospital.That day he proposed we hide our own treasure, under a little tree which we had planted together, and that we would open it when I was eighteen yeas old. Soon after that he left me forever and my dog also left me later. After that I felt very lonely then and then I ofen went to the stadium when I missed them. I often complained of the unfairness of fate, and I closed myself in and I refused to let anybody get close to me, because I was afraid of I will would lose them too. Early on the early morning of my 18th birthday, I arrived at the stadium and I opened my father's treasure feeling very upset, because of my great anticipation. To my surprise, it was a long letter. He said: "dear daughter,I am so sorry I have to leave you. Because of you, my life is changing every day and also becoming wonderful. My only regret is that I can no longer keep out wind and rain for you. You must want to know what my treasure is: that is you my baby. Wherever I am I will keep you company and watch you grow." I stood in front of the tree and said to my father: "thank you for giving me life and love, you are the best father in the world. No matter where you are I will always be proud of you!"
I only have gratitude toward fate, because I had owned the most precious asset of my life, my father. We will never be separated, for our love is so great for each other.

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