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Homework Mr. white I really can't thank you enough. I would came back to school with your help. I've been learning hard for this year now. There is a great improvement in my study with teachers and classmates' help. I'm commended and encouraged by teachers. I must carry on studing hard and will be admitted to a university. I really want to see you, but I have no chance to go ShangHai to meet you. I wish you can sent me your pictures. I have received the money and reading materials. Finally I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Roger

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"I wish you could" sounds like you want him to send you pictures but he can't; "I hope you can" sounds like you are asking him to send you the pictures. Either one is correct, "I wish you can" sounds weird though.
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Homework

Mr. White
I really can't thank you enough. I would came back to school with your help. I've been studying hard all year now. There is great improvement in my study because of help from teachers and classmates. I'm commended and encouraged by teachers. I must carry on studying hard and will be admitted to a university. I really want to see you, but I have no chance to go ShangHai to meet you. I hope you can send me your pictures. I have received the money and reading materials.
Finally I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Roger
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Homework

Mr. White
I really can't thank you enough. I would came back to school with your help. I've been learning hard for this year now. There is a great improvement in my study with teachers and classmates help. I'm commended and encouraged by teachers. I must carry on studying hard and will be admitted to a university. I really want to see you, but I have no chance to go ShangHai to meet you. I wish you could send me your pictures. I have received the money and reading materials.
Finally, I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

Roger

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