It's quite good while the intention of each sentence is clear. But be honest this kind of conversation will never happened in the reallity for it's too serious and Chinese casual talks concentrate more on the key words not lots of rigid patterns. For instance you hear two friends start their conversation with: Hello, how do you do/ how do you do, thanks. You got it? But don't worry, people will understand you.

the improved version:

My Partner: 早上好！(你好is seldom used now except the conversation between government officials ) 

Me：早上好， 你最近好玛？ 

My Partner： 我很好，谢谢。 今天早上你几点上学？ 

Me： 八点二十(in spoken Chinese the word  minite always be omitted)。昨天晚上你什么时候睡的(there is a 的 here I don't know why we just put it there to make the sentence sounds slippy)觉？ 

My Partner： 昨天晚上我十一点睡的(same here)觉，和今天早上六点起的(same here)床， 我很累。 

Me： 我觉得你应该早点(a little bit earlier is better than early)睡觉， 昨天你做作业了吗(here)？ 

My Partner： 昨天我没有做作业(不means that I do not do homework but the fact is that you fail to accomplish you homework), 我很忙。 

Me： 今天你有考试吗？ 

My Partner：今天我有三门(not 个 but 门)考试。 汉语考试，数学考试 和科学考试(there is no such thing in China, you'd better use 理综考试 in China it is a examination combine Physics Chemistry and Biology)。 

Me： 我们是同学，所以我也有三个考试。(Excuse me but I don't see the logical connection here.)昨天晚上我一个半小时学习(right sentance order is 昨天晚上我学了一个半小时)，但是不用功(但是没有很专心 you mean that you didn't fully concentrate at that time right?)。你害怕(use two characters is always better than use a single character though the meaning is similiar)这次考试吗？ 

My Partner： 我不太害hai怕这(zhe not zhi)次考试。你今年学几门课？ 

Me： 我今年学十一门课。 我今年学英语， 汉语， 数学，体育，美术，家政，历史，戏剧化学，生物 和物理。你喜欢什么课？ (Really? What an awesome conbination !)

My Partner： 我喜欢上戏剧，英语和美术。你以后想做什么工作？ 

Me： 我以后想汉语老师，因为我最喜欢学汉语。你呢？ 

My Partner： 我以后想zuo当服务员(you mean waitress?)。我要zou走了。拜拜！ (拜拜is enough. )

Me： 再见，拜拜(bye bye is enough)

Good Job Keep Working!

Roleplay for My Chinese Class!

Roleplay for My Chinese Class!