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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Happiness is not about being immortal nor having food or rights inone’s hand. It’s about having each tiny wish come true, or havingsomething

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Hmm I agree, although, I am actually really happy when it comes to food!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Happiness is not about being immortal nor having food or rights in one’s hand. It’s about having each tiny wish come true, or having something.


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There was a missing full stop at the end of the second sentence, and a space missing in "inone’s" & "havingsomething".


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