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Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts Nowadays,campus thefts have had a very bad effect in our daily life.It is always surrounding us,so more and more people attach importance to this problem. According to analysis of campus thefts,we know why our things are stolen is lack of safeguard awareness.For example,we often place our valuable things anywhere so that we can not find them immediately.And sometimes,we may forgot closing dorms windows or doors.Of course,some people like to show new products they've got these days because of their vanity, it may arrest theves' eyes...and so on. In order to protect our equities,we should enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts.The most importance thing we should do is being low-pitched and cloing windows and doors before leaving our dorms.I believe if we pay more attention to it,we will share a harmonious campus with each other.

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Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts

Nowadays,campus thefts have had a very bad effect in our daily life.It is always surrounding us,so more and more people attach importance to this problem.
According to analysis of campus thefts,we know why our things are stolen is lack of safeguard awareness.For example,we often place our valuable things anywhere , so that we can not find them immediately.And Sometimes , we may forgot forget closing  to close dorms windows or doors.Of course Although,these days some people like to show their new products which they've got these days - it is because of their vanity-, it may arrest theves' eyes...and so on.
In order to protect our equities(??),we should enhance awareness to guard against campus thefts.The most importance important  thing we should do , is being low-pitched and closing windows and doors before leaving our dorms.I believe if we pay more attention to it,we will share have a harmonious campus with each other.

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Thank God!Got so worried an shocked!:))))
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hah,of course not,it is just my homework
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wow!Is it that much common in ur country??:O I never knew that!

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