最初の夜に野営をしました
最初の夜に野営をしました
今日家族と犬二匹一緒に野営に来ました.途中に車で私の犬は吐き出した.気持ち悪いでした!鞄と靴に零した.
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最初の夜に野営をしました
最初の夜に野営をしました
今日、家族と犬二匹と一緒に野営に来ました.途中に、車の中で私の犬は吐き出しました.気持ち悪いでしたかったです!鞄と靴に零しました.
Your writing was really good and fully understandable!
You meant "night of first day" by "最初の夜"? If so, "一日目の夜" would be more comfortable. 野営 is not wrong, but キャンプ would sound more usual.
Anyway, you did a good job!
Did you have a good time, except the event in your car on the way?
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Hello! Were your dog all right? I hope you and your dogs had a good time at the camp site!
Most of the sentences are good, but I can't understand the last one.
「零した」←Do you want to say that your dog threw up on your bag and shoes?
If so, you should use the word 「戻した」←the past tense of 「戻す」or 'modosu' means
throw up or vomit. Of course, you can use 「吐く」in this sentence as vomit, in that case,you can say「鞄と靴の上に吐いたのです」 . 「吐いたのです」can be said 「吐いたんです」as a casual
expression.
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