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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am learning English and I would like to improve it. My native language is Italian and I grew up in Italy, I like listening to music, surfing in the Internet

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English and I would like to improve it. My native language is Italian and I grew up in Italy, I like listening to music, surfing in the Internet

 

........My native language is Italian and I grew up in Italy.  I like listening to music and surfing the internet.  (or is it "I like listening to music while surfing the internet." or  is it " I like listening to music on the internet."

The manner in which you wrote the sentence gives rise to confusion.

 

Well done.

 

Kind regards,

Patrick

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English and I would like to improve it. My native language is Italian and I grew up in Italy, I like listening to music and surfing the Internet.

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