Please correction for me : My short story 001

My boss paid my salary last month, but, I'm not didn't happy and satisfied.
I saw that there's always a difference between a white job and a black job. My friend got a more higher salary, because, he has an easy and black job.
But now, I know that if I have a real and white job, at all times, it is better.
My goals are very big and achievable.
I see that my neighbor has good  language English speaking skills, so he/she has a good job.
And I think, I need to improve my skills for my job situation.
I can do it because I want to be successful in my life.
In this real short story, two kind of feelings are hidden.
My emotion is the best way for me to be successful.
I believe that every emotion is only a personal motive and it's very useful.

Please correction for me : My short story 001

My boss paid my salary last month, but wasn't happy because it wasn't a satisfactory salary.
I always saw the difference between a white job and a black job. My friend got more salary because he has an easy and block job.
But now I know that if I have a real,white job at all times, it would be better.
My goals are very big and accessible.
I see the speaking skills and good job my english speaking neighbour has.
And I think, I need to improve my skills and job situation.
I can do it because I want success in my life.
In this real short story two kinds of feeling are hidden.
My emotion is the best way to success.
I believe that every emotion is only a personal motive and is very useful.

GOOD JOB. JUST A LITTLE BIT OF FEEDBACK, I'D SAY YOU SHOULD LIMIT THE AMOUNT OF COMMAS YOU USE IN YOUR ENGLISH. COMMAS ARE ONLY USED TO SIGNIFY PAUSES IN SPEECH. YOU WILL LEARN MORE ABOUT COMMAS AS YOU PROGRESS WITH YOUR ENGLISH BUT TRY NOT TO USE THEM SO MUCH FOR NOW. :) ALSO, IN THE LAST SENTENCE OF YOUR STORY YOU TALKED ABOUT 'EMOTION?' I'M JUST WONDERING IF THE ENGLISH WORD "DETERMINATION" IS MORE IN LINE WITH WHAT YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT? 

HOPE THAT HELPS!