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Midnight in Paris
I watched this movie with Turkish subtitles. I think this movie is was interesting, but movie's final the ending is was not good. I think it can be had could have been better. I was watching excitedly, but the movie is ended suddenly. I was shocked. I said, "Nooo, noo, this is not the final ending is not this.
Owen Wilson was called played the role of Gill Gil in this film. He was engaged with to Inez.Gill Gil was a screenwriter and he wrote novel would-be novelist. He loved the past times, and he was been in a dream everynight every night in on the Paris streets. He was waiting in front of a church. When rang a the church bell rang, he got into an old car. He met everynight every night with different writers or different artists. One night, he fall fell in with love with Adriana. Adriana was very beauty beautiful. She was daiting dating a lot of man men, but she was loving loved gill Gil, too. ButGill Gil didn't choose the past. He decided to living live now in the present. He brake broke up with Inez. He walked around is in the Paris streets , until he met the another girl, and they went away together.
Midnight in Paris
I watched this movie with Turkish subtitles. I thought the movie was interesting, but the ending was not very good. I thought it could have been better. I watched excitedly, but when the movie ended, I was shocked. I said nooo noo don't end like this!
Owen Wilson was called Gill in this film. He was a novelist, engaged to Inez. He loved past times and he had been having a dream everynight of Paris streets. He was waiting in front of a church. When a bell rang, he got in an old car. He met everynight with different writers or different artists. One night, he fell in love with Adriana. Adriana was very beautiful. She was dating a lot of men, but she loved Gill, too. But Gill didn't choose the past, he decided to live for now. He broke up with Inez. He walked around the Paris streets, he met the girl and they went away together.
OK, this is more of a rewrite, sorry. I changed most of the first paragraph to past tense. I haven't seen the movie, so I hope I got everything right.
Put a space after a comma,not before :)
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