First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English now(no need for comma before because)because I want to study aboard in the US or Canada. My native language is Chinese Mandarin and I grew up in a tourist city--Yichang, in Hubei Province, PRC. It's near the Three Gorges and very beautiful.I hope (that)you can come here for a visit.
I enjoy surfing on the internet,although we don't have access to some websites(...You know) I am fond of railways and subway systems in metropolitan cities such as Tokyo Railway networks.Umm...that's all,thanks for reading.

Some countries need article ""the" such as" the United States, the Netherlands, the United Kingdom, the Philippines"

Good job. Keep up the great work.

I am learning English now, because I want to study aboard in US or Canada. My native language is Chinese Mandarin and I grew up in a tourist city--Yichang, in Hubei Province, PRC. It's near the Three Gorges and very beautiful. I hope you can come here for a visit. I enjoy surfing on the Internet, though we don't have access to some websites (...You know) I am fond of railways and subway systems in metropolitan cities. Such as Tokyo Railway networks.Umm...that's all, thanks for reading.