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introducing myself I am learning English, because I want to live and work in USA. God loves me, and I won green card lottery. My English is enought for traveling but not enought for living and working in the country. May native language is russian. I enjoy music, a good music, diving, my job and my friends. But more of then I like active life and new impressions.

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[email protected] hello My name is jessica i saw your profile today at(italki.com)and became interested in you i will also like to know you the more and i want you to send a mail to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom l am.Here is my email address([email protected]).I believe we can move from here.I am waiting for your mail to my email address above.jessica.(Remember the distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life) Please reply me with my email address here ([email protected] ------------------------------------------------------------------------- [email protected] こんにちは 私の名前は（italki.com）で今日のあなたのプロフィールを見て、私はまた、あなたの詳細をお知りになりたいでしょうあなたに興味を持つようになったジェシカだと私はあなたのための私の写真を与えることができるので、私はあなたが私のメールアドレスにメールを送信するリットルam.Hereは私のメールアドレス（[email protected]）。ある人を知って私たちは私のメールアドレスabove.jessicaにメールを待っていhere.Iから移動できると信じています（距離や色を覚えておいては問題ではありません生活の中ではなく愛の事項がたくさん） ここに私のメールアドレスを私に返信してください （[email protected]）
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Hello

I am learning English, because I want to live and work in the USA. God loves me, and I won the green card lottery(I got a green card). My English is enough for travelling but not enough for living and working in the country. My native language is Russian. I enjoy music(good music), diving, my job and my friends. But even more than that I like an active life and meeting new people.

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introducing myself

I am learning English because I want to live and work in USA. God loves me, and I won green card lottery. I have a green card (?) My English is enought for traveling but not enought for living and working in the country. May native language is Russian. I enjoy music, a good music, diving, my job and my friends. But most of all then I like having an active life and experiencing new things.


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Grammar:- A few minor grammar mistakes, I have re-written in blue the way a native speaker would say it. 

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Some countries need article ""the" such as" the United States, the Netherlands, the United Kingdom, the Philippines"
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introducing myself

I am learning English(no need for comma before because) because I want to live and work in the USA. God loves me, and I won green card lottery. My English is enought enough for traveling but not enought enough for living and working in the country. May My native language is russian. I enjoy (listening to) music, a good music, diving, doing my job and spending time with my friends. But more of then than that, I like an active life (fast-paced life)and to have new impressions.

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