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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi,everyone.I have learned English for many years,but my English is still poor.I am not good at writing,speaking and listening. Now I don't know how to improve my English and hope that I can find a way to improve it here. finally,let me introduce myselt ,I am a chinese girl and Igrew up in Hunan.My native language is Chinese and I graduated from beijing university of TCM and now I am a TCM doctor.I enjoy music,reading and films .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,_everyone._I have been learning English for many years now,_but my English is still poor._I am not good at writing,_speaking and listening. Now, I don't know how to improve my English and hope that I can find a way to improve it here.
Finally,_let me introduce myself._I am a Chinese girl and I_grew up in Hunan._My native language is Chinese and I graduated from Beijing University of TCM. and Now I am a TCM doctor._I enjoy listening to music,_reading and watching films.

 

I've always been interested about traditional medicine. It's difficult to use it in the healthcare field though. By the way, I'm a nurse. :)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everyone. I have been learning/studying English for many years, but my English is still poor. (not at all!) I am not good at writing, speaking and or listening. Now I don't know how to improve my English and (this conjunction 'and' is correct!) hope that I can find a way to improve it here. (fine!)
Finally, let me introduce myself: I am a chinese girl and I grew up in Hunan. My native language is Chinese and (conjunction is ok) I graduated from Beijing university of TCM - and (just one too many 'ands' I feel) now I am a TCM doctor. I enjoy music, reading and films.

 

See my other comments about punctuation - space after punctuation!  TCM should be introduced as an acronym first I think.

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You write great. I worked at Hunan agricultural University and nearly froze. Plus the food is very spicy.

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