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Haven't been here for a long time.Actually i have signed in italki every day.But each time i only see the messages that some kind languages partners sending me.And browsing others compositions.If i 'm in a good mood,i will also make a comment.
Today,in fact,i still don't want to write anything.Though i'm learning english.Anyway,i don't want to express my emotion or my daytime to share with others.I'm scared to be hurt.Maybe i am really a timid girl.However,just myself always don't want to face the reality.
I need to make a stronge heart.Really!I usually think too much.That's a bad habit.I have to correct it.
Time flies!After 30 minutes,work will be over.And the day of working will be end.............
Keep smile!!!
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I haven't been here for a long time.Actually I have signed in italki every day.But each time I only see look through the messages from that some kind languages partners sending me and browseing others compositions.If I 'm in a good mood, I will also make a comment.
Today,in fact, I still don't want to write anything.Though I'm learning English.Anyway, I don't want to express my emotions or my daytime to share my daytime with others.I'm scared to be and hurt.Maybe I am really a timid girl.However,just I myself always don't always want to face the reality.
I need to make have a stronger heart.Really!I usually think too much.That's a bad habit.I have to correct it.
Time flies!After 30 minutes,work will be over.And the day of working day will be end.............
Keep smileing!!!
Being a timid girl is not a good reason to lock yourself within your own thoughts and emotions. Set them free and let them float!
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Thanks,i know how to deal with it.But thank you all the same.I'm just a sensitive girl.So i'm easy to be hurt.
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you're right, I know how it is when a friend hurts you but you shouldn't allow them to change you,think of that as an experience and move on :) don't waste your time thinking about that, think of it as a way to help you to know someone better next time so if something happens you won't get surprised :)
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