My dream

I think everyone has the freedom to pursue their dreams.  Once my I had have a dream that I can have my own clinic clicin in Liverpool.  That I can go to the Anfield pitch to watch the football games and I can be a doctor like in my dreams hope.

Because I am a medical mediacal student, so I think it's very fanning(?), and I think that I would be it's very proud to be a doctor who cures the sickness and saves the patients. In the future I must become the best anesthesiologist. 

In the On other hand, I love football very much and Gerrard is my favourite favourate football player.  He is so charming to me, first his technique technology is so very good, nobody can doubt that it.  Secondly and it's the most importantly, he is loyal to Liverpool.  Liverpool is his belief when he was a child, and at one time he said that the blood of Liverpool flow in his veins(most people say: veins) blood vessels.  He is the soul of Liverpool and he is the greatest captain.  So Which is why I love Gerrard so much.

But I think the dream is so far away, because my English is so poor. Althought I strive very hard to learn English very strively, it's still so hard for to me.  I do not have any no good ideas to learn it better.

Remember 1 space after commas, usually 2 spaces after end of sentence periods.  Commas or periods go immediately after the word, then follow by spaces.

Such as:  I went to the market, but there was no more eggs to buy.