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The place I want to go to I want to go to travel around the world.So I want to go to many countries.Like Dubai,England,America,India.But the place I most want to visit Dubai.Because Dubai is a modern city.There are many tall buildings in Dubai. For example,halifata is the most tall building in the world.The shopping mall is very big in Duibai.The things are very cheap in it.There are desert in Dubai.So the weather is very hot in summer.There are many people from different countries in Dubai.They have a job and enjoy their job.I want to go to Dubai,I think I will go there soon.

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The place I want to go to

I want to go to travel around the world,so I want to go to many countries.Like Dubai,England,America,India.But the place I most want to visit is Dubai.Because it is a modern city.There are many tall buildings(重复性太大).
For example,Halifata is the most tall building in the world.The shopping mall is very big in Duibai.Things are very cheap in it.There are desert in Dubai.So the weather is very hot in summer.There are many people from different countries in Dubai.They have  jobs and enjoy their jobs(不可能这么多人做同个工作吧亲~).I want to go to Dubai,I think I will go there soon.

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