Hi Vicky!

I'm Dan. Well done on your first entry. Here's my suggestions for your paragraph.

hello,everyone.
I'm vicky. I'm from China. I am learning oral English, because I need to use it at work in my daily works. My native language is Chinese , and I grew up in China. I enjoy surfing the in Internet, make making friends , and travelling. I hope to find a native English speaker who just wants to learn Chinese., we We can make friends and help each other.
I'm here waiting for u, my friend. =]

I think it's pretty good Vicky. My only corrections were:

- to place the necessary preposition to in front of use.

- remove 'in my daily works'. This is because most people go to work each day. Therefore, it's simpler to say 'I need to use it at work' or 'I need to use it for my work'.

- surf the Internet. English speakers more commonly say 'surf the net'.

- If we say 'I enjoy', we use the subsequent nouns in the infinitive form - e.g: surfing, making, travelling.

- conjugate want for the second person singular - he, she, it wants

Keep up the good work! See you later. :)