IELTS essay topic

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topic: Some believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

Answer:
Childhood is inherited to everyone who has been born in this world, and it should not be grabbed stolen as it is a right of the children (or; a child's right). Nevertheless, to get correct decisions for a better future for children, the correct decision should be made as is a must now that the cuddly little kids are unable to think ahead (or; the cuddly little kids are unable to think for themselves).

Many people think that kids have hardly any time for leisure if they are engaged in education since childhood. The Free time is very important for young children to improve their mental satisfaction. Also, interacting with siblings at home they can lose loneliness can make them feel less lonely. Therefore people accept that it is (or; it's) better to let them stay home until they are six or seven years old.

However, sending a child to school as soon as possible can develop the growth of a child's mind, because at the beginning they can keep their concentration on studies without any distractions as their mind is not (or; isn't) being filled with unsuitable inappropriate views. As a result, children always try to involve themselves in studies when they have the chance to meet together. For example, they read short stories with the help of pictures, although it cannot be understood (or; although they cannot understand it) and they start to draw something on the wall, compound etc.

Consequently, most of the children start their communication skills little by little (or; rather slowly) and then they try to say something using complex ideas according to the knowledge they have got learnt (or; received). Improving To improve reading and writing ability skills, many children are persuaded (or; encouraged) to read some advertisements, posters, banners etc. As well as Also, they learn to write from simple words first up to and then later on they learn long sentences. later on.

Hence, parents must think about the younger generation as they are the future. Even if children go to school, they have a lot of time for attending with to attend leisure activities now as the school is held for only eight hours. So it is (or; it's) a responsible responsibilty of (or; for) elders to give opertunity for them them (or; the children) an opportunity to enroll within (or; for) a school at an early age.