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My poor fish. Those days I haven't back home and I don't know what happend in my house.But today when I came into my home, my fish is out of my sight. I asked my mother that where is fish? She said that" the day before yesterday your father bought two turtles and put them with fish. When we haven't attention them, they ate the fish." I feel sad because we hurt the fish and we don't know the tortoise want to eat fish.

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My poor fish.

Those For some days I haven't been back home and I don't know what happend in my house.But today when I came into my home, I could not see my fish is out of my sight. I asked my mother that where is my fish? She said that" the day before yesterday your father bought two turtles and put them with the fish. When we weren't paying haven't attention them, they ate the fish." I feel sad because we hurt the fish and we don't didn't know the tortoise would want to eat fish. 

 

You would want to say "where are my fish" if there were more than one.

 

I'm sorry about your fish.  I love animals, too.  

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They are cute,you can do it.
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wow ,your poor fish ,i also want to keep some fish

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