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August 2012 This is a new month which have began, and I received a lot of good news. New appartement, new car, and a new job for the next three months and I've been accepted in my new university for my come back in the study, finally, I did it! (I know, I know, There is a lot of "new" in my sentence, but don't worry, i didn't do it on purpose.) I can't wait to begin the studies so as to learn some intersting things. I'm still a egghead, lol. I don't know if my english is good, but I know one thing it's that i love this language. Someone could have the kindness to check my text?

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August 2012

This It is a new month which have began, and I have received a lot of good news.
New appartement apartment, new car, and a new job for the next three months and I've been accepted in my to a new university for my come back in the study to continue my studies. Finally, I did it!
(I know. I know. There is a lot of "new" in my sentence, but don't worry, I didn't do it on purpose.)
I can't wait to begin the my studies so as to I can learn some interesting things. I'm still a egghead, lol.
I don't know if my english is good, but I know one thing. It's that I love this language.
Someone could have the kindness to check my text? Could someone be so kind as to check my text?

 

I hope this helps! Congratulations on all of your exciting news!

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Thank you everyone for cheering me. You are so sweet. I did a lot of nice met here.
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August 2012

A new month has begun, and I have received a lot of good news.
A new apartment, new car, and a new job for the next three months and I've been accepted by a new university to continue studying. Finally, I did it!
(I know. I know. There are many "new" in my sentences, but don't worry, I didn't do it on purpose.)
I can't wait to begin studying so I can learn some interesting things. I'm still an egghead, lol.
I don't know if my english is good, but I know one thing. I love this language.
Could someone please check my text?

 

Hope this helps. Your English is quite good, just needs a bit more work :) Keep it up!

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Congratulation,so busy boy finally get his rewards.
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恭喜

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