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I want to learn english well . It will help me in my study and my live . I can learn any one my native language (Arabic ).
wait your message to start .Salem Alekum! Ramadan Karim. Some corrections: my native language is Arabic My native language is Arabic (capital M) I want to learn English well. (Perfect! Except no space between the last word of the sentence and the full stop.) It will help me in my study and life. (life not live e.g. I live in Egypt. I want to see Amr Diab live (see him in concert) I live my life. I await your replies.
PUNCTUATION: Very good job! Just needed a period (as the English call it, a “full stop”) after “Arabic” in the first sentence. Forgot to add this: Just make sure the period is right next to the last letter or character in the statement. Example: I want to learn english well . There is no space between the “l” and the period.
SPELLING: Forgot that “any one” was misspelled. It should be “anyone”.
OVERVIEW: Still a very good job with introducing yourself.
my My native language is Arabic.
I want to learn english English well . It will help me in my study studies and my live life . I can learn teach any one anyone my native language (Arabic ).
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Corrected: My native language is Arabic. I want to learn English well. It will help me in my studies and my life. I can teach anyone my native language (Arabic). I will wait to hear from you.
ASSESSMENT:
CAPITALIZATION: All proper nouns (names of people, places, languages, faiths, etc.) begin with a capital letter. Examples: Arabic, English, Jordanian, American, etc.
GRAMMAR: First, regarding “study”, you can either state which field of study, such as, “It will help me in my study of English.” You can also make it more general, like I did, and say, “It will help me in my studies (plural here).”
Next, about “live”, that is easily confused. “To live” is the verb form. “Live” (said with the long ”I” sound like “ice”) means that something is happening right now. A TV show is sometimes taped live before a studio audience. “Life” is the noun.
Third, people often confuse “teach” and “learn”. To teach or to instruct someone is to give your knowledge to the other person (the student). Therefore, teachers and instructors teach or instruct. Students (learners) learn. Teachers and instructors (the difference often has to do with training and legal requirements where the people work) give the knowledge about a subject in which they are experts (by training, education, or experience) ---> they teach or instruct. The students, or learners, receive that knowledge about a subject that is usually new to them (they do not have training, education, or experience in that subject) ---> they learn.
Lastly, the last statement (wait your message to start .) just needs to be reworded. The original way is a little awkward...out of order.
PUNCTUATION: Very good job! Just needed a period (as the English call it, a “full stop”) after “Arabic” in the first sentence.
SPELLING: Great good job with spelling! No errors!
OVERVIEW: Good start! You have some errors that can be easily corrected.
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