Walk in Taipei (1)

I try to write my travel diaries.
It was the 25th of June, it was a very fine day because of the Japanese football team's win to enter the final tournament of the world cup. ( えっ？「final tournament」はスペインとオランダではないですか？「round of 16」と言いたいかな？）
I started toward Narita, seeing some people wearing the blue uniform who had watched the match against Denmark.
They were very excited very much, and I wanted to join them, but I didn't 'cause it was early morning. lol
I went to Narita by car with my co-workers. It took only 1 hour. Riding in a car was very convenient! 
And from Narita to Taipei, it took only 3.5 hours. Taipei is very close to Japan.
By then, it was very smooth trip, but a little accident was happened at immigration in Taipei.
I showed my passport to a woman officer, then she stared at me and said "Is this you?"
What!? What did she say!? Actually, my passport's photo was taken about 9 years ago,
but my face hasn't changed so much from 10 years ago!!
She told me to show any other I.D. but I had had no I.D. with a photo, so I asked "Without Photo?"
She said OK, so I showed her my insurance certificate. I only had it as formal I.D.
But She said "Photo?" however even though she had just said OK to no photo.
I only had had my dance studio's I.D. cards with a photo, so I showed her one of them telling her "It's not formal."
Then she nodded her head likely she convinced. At last I was released. I was just flustered, haha.
And we arrived at "Hotel Grandformosa Reagent Taipei," which is a very famous hotel in Taipei.
Michael Jackson had stayed here. I could come here because this is my company trip.
I was already tired. I had to take a rest in my room for a while.

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