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the environmental contamination The environmental contamination is becoming a pressing issue that modern people are confronted with. It is of great importance concerning the whole world and human beings.This essay will analyze some possible reasons for this phenomenon and offer a few feasible solutions to this issue. It is claimed that various factors contribute to this issue. The first reason that needs to be taken into account is that over-industrialization and fast drain of energy. City being commercialization cause the environmental pollution. People are confronted with break of ecological system if we still drive privacy car, disafforestation, and built factory.It will be a vicious cycle. The problem also lies in people's awareness. As for the addressing of this issue,a range of proposals have been set forth. Above everything else, the government should have a feasible measure to keep the city can normal running in fast tempo of life and overpopulation. Moreover,government also can increase the revenue from new factory to decrease the number. Do some public advertisement to let people aware how important of environment. In conclusion, The forming of this issue can be attributed to a variety of reasons. And in order to address this issue, a joint-effort from government and everyone is urgently required.

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The Environmental contamination

The Environmental contamination is becoming a pressing issue that modern people are being confronted with. It is of great importance as it concerns the whole world and every human beings. This essay will analyze some possible reasons for this phenomenon and offer a few feasible solutions to this issue.

It is claimed that various factors contribute to this issue. The first reason that needs to be taken into account is that the over-industrialization and fast draining of energy. Cities being commercialized causes the environmental pollution. People are confronted with breaks of in the ecological system if we still drive private cars, disafforestation deforest and build factories. It will be a vicious cycle. The problem also lies in people's awareness.

As for the addressing of this issue, a range of proposals have been set forth. Above everything all else, the government should have a feasible measure to keep the city can normal running in fast tempo of life and overpopulation(Not sure what you mean here.) Moreover, government also can increase the revenue taxes from new factories to decrease the number. Also Do  some public advertisements could be made to let make people aware of how important of the environment is.

In conclusion, the forming of this issue can be attributed to a variety of reasons. And in order to address this issue, a joint-effort from government and everyone is urgently required.

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