First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I'm learning English because that's a kind of needed ( sort of a must ) in education and business in my country.
the thing I enjoy most is chatting so therefor ( on of them could be enough, also don't forget to use a comma before conjunctions or sort of things.) I signed up here. ( , )
waiting for your messages ;)

well done honey.

This one might help you to better writing.

 The reason I learn english is the fact that nowadays it has become a must in getting jobs and in education and business in my country. Also my keen interest in chatting with friends frrom all around the world is the thing that I enjoy the most which leads me into learning english.

hope one day all be fine and doing well.