disturbing examination
I'll attend an examination after 2 days,and I totally lack confidence.There are so much depression in my heart,that I have not a bit of energy to prepare.Oh,who can help me!!!
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Is your exam for English or Japanese, or something else?
Attend seems a little passive for an exam. Go along, maybe do something :)
Probably the best verb for exam is "sit"==>"I will sit an exam", or "I will have an exam"
No comma before "and" ==> "after 2 days and I ..."
Space after comma ==>"in my heart, ..."
Space after full stop (period)
Don't need a comma in "so much something that ..."
(People use commas more than needed)
"Oh,who can help me!!!" is not rhetorical. Needs a question mark.
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