High housing price

Nowadays, the high housing price has become s a hot topic in our society, especially for these young men, since it is an indispensable part in of our life. However, in recent years the skyrocketing price for housing it’s is too difficult to accept it to for our ordinary citizens. In Shenzhen, the housing price was has reached almost thirty thousands (what currency?) per square (what measurement?). Some one made an investigation for these young of people whom just graduated from school or who have worked for two or three years. 2-3years,  According to their current income, it’s impossible for them to afford a one house while they are young or adults times. To For many young people owning a  house it’s is one of our dreams in our life.

I believe the above phenomenon it not only exists in China but in other countries as well.  Why does the price increase so sharply? I think it is related to population explosion and the economy of one’s nation.

With the development of the economy, more and more people go from the village to the city for better living. They obtained success through several years’ struggle and hardworking hard , spontaneously, and they want to remain stable. First, Of cause ,To buy one house for themselves in it’s city, Many people have same idea, demands exceeds supply. The main problem is that many people have the same idea of buying a house in the city.  So demand exceeds supply. So a rising  price maybe is perhaps the best solution for market.
Some rich businessmen or developers in order to get more money, Which buy many houses at low prices and then sell out with higher prices to citizens? in order to make more money. 


Government should take measures to control this kind of phenomenon,
They should make more laws to punish those who purchase many houses for commercial gain use. Or they should adjust our salary in proportion.


very good - this is a complex issue you are writing about.

Try to keep your sentences shorter and simpler.  

since you are writing in English about China it isn't clear what currency (dollars or yuan) or measurement  (feet or ?)( I just tried to find out what units you currently use in China and it seemed very complicated.)