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The reason why I want to be a good English Speaker - Part 2.
Since then, I started studying English harder.
When I can understand foreign culture, philosophy, attitudes and more,
I think I can get rid of my trouble of suffering easily,
Because I can look at things on a macro scale.
If I can speak English fluently, I want to can make many friends living all over the world and communicate with them in English.
So I want to be a person who is international and having has a broad horizon person. ^^
It sounds like you have some good reasons for wanting to learn English. These are some of the same reasons I want to become better at Japanese language. As long as you keep practicing conversation and studying some lessons, I really thing that you can do it.
As for corrections, I just changed some things to make the verbs agree with each other more. "If I can speak...I can make..." I changed those to make them match with each other. Maybe I am being too picky for that, but it's something I learned from being an English writing major. :D
Overall, your entries are pretty good, and you also seem to understand why you want to learn language. Knowing why you want to learn will be a big help with being able to accomplish your goals.
When Once I can understand foreign culture, philosophy, attitude habits and more,
I think I can get rid of my trouble stop suffering so easily.
Because I can look at things on a macro scale.
If I can speak English fluently, I want to make many friends living all over the world and communicate with them in English.
So I want to be an international and open-minded having broad horizon person^^
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